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    dots Submission Name: Buh Bye Boydots
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    Author: justkillme08
    ASL Info:    18/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97/170/124
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsBuh Bye Boydots
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    You Gave Her Hope
    You Gave Her Thoughts
    You Told Her You LIked Her Alot
    She Believed You
    But New She Shouldnt Have
    Then It Wasnt To Long Till You Got With Her
    & Then You Left Her Six Days Later
    For Her To Find Out
    Its All Because Of Sex
    She Wont Do You
    So You Went Back To The Little Whore Who Will
    Boy You Crushed Her World
    But Dont Worry About Her
    She'll Be Just Fine
    Your Just A Stepping Stone
    She Had To Over Come
    Some Day She'll Find Someone
    Who'll Treat Her Right
    She Thought It Was You
    But Your Just Another Stupid Boy
    Who Got In Her Way For A Short Period Of Time
    Now Shes Moving On
    To Bigger & Better Things
    Buh Bye Boy
    You Just Lost The Best Thing That You Ever Had




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