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    dots Submission Name: Can I Call Myself Insane?dots
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    Author: FarFromSanityy
    ASL Info:    15/F/look behind youuu.
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 52/76/34
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 1015
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       Ever feel like you're the only one of your kind, and everyone else is normal...except you?


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    dotsCan I Call Myself Insane?dots
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    My thoughts run morbid and deeper than average
    I sit here questioning my love for the ones I do have
    And after everyone I've abandoned and left behind
    I cannot forgive anything after all of this time

    I live my life in a constant subconscious fear
    Afraid of nothing, the impossible, and the unclear
    I imagine the craziest of theories and lose trust for those involved
    I walk away angry, not solving what needs to be solved

    I hide and run away from things that cause me anxiety
    Though most of it beyond my control, I can't ever let them be
    I overreact to things that couldn't matter any less
    I think the reason you'll befriend me is for some kind of personality test

    Even I myself think the way I act is inane
    Now do you think I can call myself insane?




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      I know what that's like you're not insane everyone else is. I really like this one. I really like the first part..

    My thoughts run morbid and deeper than average
    I sit here questioning my love for the ones I do have
    And after everyone I've abandoned and left behind
    I cannot forgive anything after all of this time

    That reminds me of myself when I was fifteen.
    | Posted on 2007-08-19 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]
      :) You are only 15 years old. Kids don't go insane, adults do. Wait untill you're 20 then ask this question...
    | Posted on 2007-08-06 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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