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    dots Submission Name: Hello extacy!dots
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    Author: Thinkingofyou
    ASL Info:    18/f/The sunny state
    Elite Ratio:    2.83 - 283/423/132
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 907
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    Bytes: 608



    Description:
       Rough draft.
    I miss my friends. :/


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    dotsHello extacy!dots
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    Hello extacy, how have you been? Met any new friends? Changed any new lives? I've been missing you, you and your feelings. I've been wanting to see that color, I can't seem to find it in my color chart. No money means no fun. Can't you become cheaper? Just a few dollars cheaper, just so I can have a taste. Maybe a smile, or a name. I met your friend speed the other day. He's nice, he kept me up all night though. I got alot of studying in, thats good. Hows Oxycodone doing? I miss her too, didnt enjoy the ich but I do miss her. She kept me company. Well, write back soon!




    Submitted on 2007-08-05 23:47:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this becuz you confront your obsession for more! And at times I feel the same get cravings for that high just one more time but I realized that thers more to life then just a pure rush and late night walks in the dark through the park you know! I dropped it all like a bad habit becuz I met a guy who showed me what life is really about! And one day I hope you can do the same! But other then that good right and I disagree you can write when your high on speed! I know cuz I've done it! Anyways later!
    | Posted on 2007-08-20 00:00:00 | by Hip-Hop Honey | [ Reply to This ]
      lol. You can't write while you're on speed. Try Regenon it's better anyways...
    | Posted on 2007-08-06 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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