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    dots Submission Name: Are You Real?dots

    Author: Katana Ryoko
    ASL Info:    17/F/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 483/428/109
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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    dotsAre You Real?dots

    Are you really real?
    Can you really answer prayers?
    Why did you make the world
    The way it is so confusing
    People easily lost and led astray
    We're supposed to follow so blindly
    To everything that you say
    But excuse me if I wanna see
    See the world with my own eyes
    Without miracles, with only facts
    Because to me you're an answer
    To that which can't be scientifically proven
    You're the hope for those who fear
    The unknown at the end of the road
    I'm sorry if I'm one of little faith
    But I only believe in what my eyes can see

    Submitted on 2007-08-06 11:39:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sometimes what you always see is not always true, and people do make stories out of things ..seen or heard. hope i am not confusing you, but sometimes one has to feel with an open mind..and God is for sure real. I was at your stage one point of time, then i decided to CHECK on him ..with prayers and shockingly to me-they were answered. He just made me shut up.
    Not going in any further detail, this poem questions familiar feelings and many readers would identify with it, so you have done a good job, atleast it made me think and reread it.

    Keep writing :)

    | Posted on 2007-08-07 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]
      Excellent verse, Katanya! It echoes the question that many have and many ask. Just for sake of consideration, I believe God's intelligence is infinite, and it is impossible for man, with finite knowledge, to intellectually surmise his presence. An omnipotent deity with infinite intelligence can only be known by mankind by faith, and in a spiritual realm. To know him intellectually would be an impossibility for mankind, with finite, limited intelligence.

    I always enjoy your writings!
    | Posted on 2007-08-06 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Are you real? This is the mystery that man has tried to figure out and prove for thousands of years. I believe if you truly want to know him, he will reveal himself to you. The problem is you can't prove what you see and
    experience with God with others. I really like this piece;
    smooth, simple and straight to the point.
    Love and Peace,
    | Posted on 2007-08-06 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]

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