Knot Of Emotions

Author: Katana Ryoko ASL Info:    17/F/Cali Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 483 /428 /109 Words: 86

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Knot Of Emotions

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So many emotions Poured into one soul Many of them conflicting Contradicting each other Trying to hold on To my sanity Slowly slipping away Out of my grasp My breath catches My heart skips a beat I never would've thought Feelings could be the death of me Stressed out from this Knot of emotions My mind is working through Putting a name to each one Sorting the strands Until all have been sorted Then and only then Can I feel one... happiness

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Another excellent piece, Katana! Our emotions give color and dimension to the world, even if they make life a little more hectic at times! Well structured, and well written!

| Posted on 2007-08-07 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

Today must be 'good poetry day' on elite. Another beautiful piece, and this one is like many other poems of yours is simple and too familiar. We all have been there, haven't we..this land of emotions. many of them repetitive. Keep writing..i would be keen to read more of your work. - v

| Posted on 2007-08-07 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]

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