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Knot Of Emotions

Author: Katana Ryoko
ASL Info:    17/F/Cali
Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 483 /428 /109
Words: 86
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Knot Of Emotions

So many emotions
Poured into one soul
Many of them conflicting
Contradicting each other

Trying to hold on
To my sanity
Slowly slipping away
Out of my grasp

My breath catches
My heart skips a beat
I never would've thought
Feelings could be the death of me

Stressed out from this
Knot of emotions
My mind is working through
Putting a name to each one

Sorting the strands
Until all have been sorted
Then and only then
Can I feel one... happiness

Submitted on 2007-08-07 09:01:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Another excellent piece, Katana! Our emotions give color and dimension to the world, even if they make life a little more hectic at times! Well structured, and well written!
| Posted on 2007-08-07 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  Today must be 'good poetry day' on elite. Another beautiful piece, and this one is like many other poems of yours is simple and too familiar. We all have been there, haven't we..this land of emotions. many of them repetitive.

Keep writing..i would be keen to read more of your work.

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| Posted on 2007-08-07 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]

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