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    dots Submission Name: Just to talk to youdots
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    Author: gloomyanddoomy
    ASL Info:    17,female
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 81/426/527
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 736
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    dotsJust to talk to youdots
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    I cant believe I missed your message
    just got the message
    but you already gone and cant respond
    I guess I will never get the chance
    to tell you personally how I feel
    waiting for you to send me another message
    time is passing oh so slowly
    Im walking away I guess I will
    have to tell you some other time
    at least I know you tryed
    at least I know you didnt forget me
    now I have too wait for you
    time is passing your not around
    gound I have to wait for another
    time, message, sign,anything
    just to talk to you.....





    Submitted on 2007-08-07 18:19:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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