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Nature


Author: lainie75
ASL Info:    30/f/uk
Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 276 /254 /32
Words: 25
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
Total Views: 1372
Average Vote:    3.0000
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Description:


just entered my head


Nature



Like the light of your life

Beautiful , honest and free

Respect nature with Love

And let the environment be





Submitted on 2007-08-07 21:00:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Great poemon the environment and life.
Keep upthe great work.
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2007-11-24 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]


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