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    dots Submission Name: Naturedots
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    Author: lainie75
    ASL Info:    30/f/uk
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 276/254/32
    Words: 25
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 857
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 168



    Description:
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    dotsNaturedots
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    Like the light of your life

    Beautiful , honest and free

    Respect nature with Love

    And let the environment be





    Submitted on 2007-08-07 21:00:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great poemon the environment and life.
    Keep upthe great work.
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2007-11-24 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]


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