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    dots Submission Name: Love Au Naturaldots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 621
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       Happy Day & NOW ES! love,peace,joy&smiles to share

    The nature of love ~*~

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    dotsLove Au Naturaldots

    Come run
    my fertile green

    Flowers cascading
    as waves
    beneath mystical
    mountain caves

    Envelope yourself
    through swaying
    Nectar so sweet

    Who fly with
    butterflies &
    One as the family
    many the

    Submitted on 2007-08-08 12:20:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Just makes me want to kick off my shoes and run barefooted thru the dew within the lush valley. It works for me.
    | Posted on 2007-08-08 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      The rhyme scheme to this piece is very good, and it rolls offf the tongue. Why, I can just picture the scenery that you have created.

    Very well written Jane.

    | Posted on 2007-08-08 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      due I love this this could totally be one of those sweet acoustic songs this imagery is so good nothing really for me to critique here it was very very good

    much LOVE
    JAmes Gods_Guitarist
    | Posted on 2007-08-08 00:00:00 | by James Reyna | [ Reply to This ]

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