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    dots Submission Name: Moonbeam Loverdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 737
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 409



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       Happy Day & love,peace,joy&smiles to share

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    dotsMoonbeam Loverdots
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    Moonbeam Lover
    cradled undercover
    gleaming Light

    Starlight Love
    shining from above
    guiding Night

    Gifting Friend
    flowers you do send
    as Life

    Eternal King
    message you do bring
    ending strife

    Moonbeam Lover
    Starlight Love
    Gifting Friend
    Eternal King
    to thee I sing ~*~




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      For some reason I gravitate to the poems with the least comments because sometimes they tend to be the poems that have the most to say in my opinion, but anyway I like the simplicity of this piece. Simplicity can be refreshing if you know what I mean. Like in musical terms, when rock was getting to complicated it took punk to put everything back in perspective, meaning that sometimes we can take ourselves too seriously, which can lead to art becoming pretentious rather than emotional, creative and original.
    | Posted on 2007-09-11 00:00:00 | by Martin S. Allen | [ Reply to This ]
      This piece just drips of hope and hope can cure many ills. The way you accentuate the positive is quite warming to the heart.
    | Posted on 2007-08-08 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      What a lovely testament to love this is. Your words are very meaningfull and straight from the heart.

    Great stuff from a Celtic Queen.

    Celtic King.
    | Posted on 2007-08-08 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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