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Stubborn girl, Dear Boy


Author: xaingua
ASL Info:    16/Female/A quiet place
Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 11 /9 /11
Words: 136
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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My heart has two faces and one seems to be stonger than the other.


Stubborn girl, Dear Boy



I know you wonder why it is
I never meet your gaze
Or why disovering my heart
Has been like walking through a maze.

It's not about you at all, I promise
Something is wrong with me
There are some things I hide from you
I dont want you to see

I sang to you a melody
I thought you'd sing along
Turns out you are for someone else
You're another lover's song

She's sweet, and kind, and a gentel soul
She'll be ready for a love that is true
But I long for something more, dear boy
More than I long for you.

There is not enough time for you to wait
On a stubborn girl like me.
So don't take it to heart
when I ignore you gaze on me.




Submitted on 2007-08-08 16:28:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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