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    dots Submission Name: Stubborn girl, Dear Boydots
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    Author: xaingua
    ASL Info:    16/Female/A quiet place
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 11/9/11
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 856
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    Description:
       My heart has two faces and one seems to be stonger than the other.


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    dotsStubborn girl, Dear Boydots
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    I know you wonder why it is
    I never meet your gaze
    Or why disovering my heart
    Has been like walking through a maze.

    It's not about you at all, I promise
    Something is wrong with me
    There are some things I hide from you
    I dont want you to see

    I sang to you a melody
    I thought you'd sing along
    Turns out you are for someone else
    You're another lover's song

    She's sweet, and kind, and a gentel soul
    She'll be ready for a love that is true
    But I long for something more, dear boy
    More than I long for you.

    There is not enough time for you to wait
    On a stubborn girl like me.
    So don't take it to heart
    when I ignore you gaze on me.




    Submitted on 2007-08-08 16:28:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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