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    dots Submission Name: Just Who I Want To Bedots
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    Author: justkillme08
    ASL Info:    18/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97/170/124
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 651
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    dotsJust Who I Want To Bedots
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    im just who i want to be
    got a problem
    take it up with me
    you want to talk shit
    well bitch back it up please
    because i dont need you
    to waist my time
    im not here to please

    im just fine with who ive grown to be
    they call me brittaney
    isnt that extrodinary
    i got these dreams
    and to tell you the truth
    imma pruse them
    because i have determination ya c
    i wont give in to lil bitches
    who doubt what i wanna do
    and soon enough your gunna c
    me in the lime light
    my name will be so big n bright

    and your gunna be wishin
    yous was me
    then i know your gunna try to be
    someone you thought youd never be
    a friend to me
    but ho look
    you wont even get close enough to touch
    because i dont play those high school games
    i dont deal with drama or wanna bes

    so keep talking shit
    just ilke your gunna do
    because im done
    i dont even got another word for you





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    ||| Comments |||
      bloody good lyrics. Keep that frame of mind.



    peace
    Grim
    | Posted on 2007-08-14 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      nice [censored]en write i like the way u feel about those pp
    | Posted on 2007-08-08 00:00:00 | by boya | [ Reply to This ]


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