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    dots Submission Name: Little Blowing Angel Featherdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 487
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       Another river, nature, inspired piece - little angel feathers floating by ~*~
    love,peace,joy&smiles to share

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    dotsLittle Blowing Angel Featherdots

    Little blowing
    Angel feather ~ ~ ~
    Reminder of our
    time together
    Upon the river
    Joyfully giving
    for ALL
    BEINg ~*~
    In unknown
    & what we're
    Feel River
    cascade down
    Mother Nature
    flowing gown
    Drifting on
    into the sea
    Divine Love
    Alive and
    Free ~*~

    Submitted on 2007-08-09 13:01:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      On this cool March day, I needed a break and was pleased to be able to sit along the river bank to enjoy nature's beauty with you. Your nature poems are always a pleasure to read! :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-03-14 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      Tiffany, this is a delightful poem with an imaginative story! It inspires a feeling of peace and joy in the reader, and it is delightful to contemplate an Angel's feather drifting ethereally down the river of life, flowing peacefully by!
    | Posted on 2007-08-13 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautifully written
    This write captured every emotion I have inside and made me more Thankful then I already am that God Created Nature
    Great Job!!!
    God Bless

    Please keep in touch
    | Posted on 2007-08-09 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Once again, your description is very vivid and the imagery you create is quite magical.

    River Boy.
    | Posted on 2007-08-09 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      You never fail to give the proper nod to the beauty of nature and all it has to offer. Lead me to my hammock and I shall soak it all in.
    | Posted on 2007-08-09 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]

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