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    dots Submission Name: Not Todaydots
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    Author: FarFromSanityy
    ASL Info:    15/F/look behind youuu.
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 52/76/34
    Words: 281
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
    Total Views: 1033
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1705



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    dotsNot Todaydots
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    It's like I'm invisible to the masses anymore
    And I'm veiled behind the misunderstandings
    I've held my peace for too long, it's too late
    For you to hear my silent screams
    To feel the numbness I harbor so deep

    Why can't you give me the only thing I want from you?
    To hear me out so you can help me through...

    But no, not today, I do this to myself you say
    It's so easy to blame the victim
    Denial is the easiest thing to come around
    But no, not today, I do this to myself you say
    The obviousness, the negligence I feel
    It'll all come crashing down on you
    When you finally start to believe this is real

    The more you hide behind your fear that somethings wrong
    The more I fall in darkness, the worse I become
    You're digging my grave so carelessly
    While I cover my mistake with bracelets
    Pull me out, pull me out, I'm in too deep...

    Why can't you give me the only thing I want from you?
    To hear me out so you can help me through...

    But no, not today, I do this to myself you say
    It's so easy to blame the victim
    Denial is the easiest thing to come around
    But no, not today, I do this to myself you say
    The obviousness, the negligence I feel
    It'll all come crashing down on you
    When you finally start to believe this is real

    You selfishly refuse to give me the one thing I need most from you
    No one wants to hear me out, it's too late
    This is something I'll never get through...




    Submitted on 2007-08-09 20:54:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It's depressing but I like it good wright..
    | Posted on 2007-08-19 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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