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Dirty Works

Author: lucianraven
ASL Info:    21/M/Spfld Il
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Words: 100
Class/Type: Rant /Venting
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Oh my fucking god I'm so sick of doing EVERYTHIGN in this god damn house! so I'm ranting about it, feel free to bitch right back.

Dirty Works

I feel like fucking cinderella
cleaning every day
I clean up all their stupid shit
while my brothers off at play
I do the dishes
sweep the floors
like im their fucking butler whore
i cook them food
then clean the kitchen
and if its not perfect
listen to them bitching
you stupid fuck
you messed it up
well screw you too
its more than you do!
the shit is hot
the shit is heavy
my mind is tearing
like fucking confetti
i've had enough
i'll do no more
now wait one second
whilst i mop the floor

Submitted on 2007-08-09 20:54:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I hate to see pieces without a comment - and sometimes yep, you just need to vent and get it off your chest.

We've all had those days! Well, don't forget Cinderella is the better person - maybe you'll have a pumpkin turn into a carriage or sportscar & you can get the heck out of there!

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| Posted on 2007-08-15 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]

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