This piece is very moving, its many images are extremely vivid and unique. I think that I enjoy your pieces without the attached pictures...
I myself sometimes use pictures for inspiration, however, I think that letting people use their own imagination makes every piece more personal and special.
I definitely look forward to more writing from you.
"A secret life, a secret world
All but a sheer utopia on small fragments
Of life against the plagueridden story of her soul
That takes her days to chaos and despair"
It is somehow weird to see my own perspective distorted, yet the essence of it so similar. I wonder how words can awake images like that, how they change your neural connections... guess I'd have to study linguistics, nlp, memetics and hermeneutics more ;))
Ahhh,how to comment on a piece that leaves one speechless?
Signature coinages, mind-splitting imagery. However I am beginning to think you may be right in rewriting your stuff because of repetition and unoriginality. Give stories a shot though, I wonder what happened to your 'Hell's Angels'...