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    dots Submission Name: Poetic Beingdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 729
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 603



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       One of those that just appears on the page - fun
    Enjoy a wonderful weekend ES & love,peace,joy&smiles to share
    tif


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    dotsPoetic Beingdots
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    Droplets of water
    merge as seconds
    to form the river
    of space and time
    Nature is all Poets
    singing out in rhyme

    And, Divine prose
    sprinkled sands
    of BEINg
    beneath "IT's"
    toes

    So, relationship
    emerges
    Energy surges
    as ALL
    essences of Life -
    Son, daughter,
    husband, wife

    Spirit Gold
    Story told

    SEE
    BE
    Within

    Without regret
    forgiven sin

    Inside Out
    Outside IN




    Submitted on 2007-08-10 13:03:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Quite a little beauty of a poem! I love it when you can say much in few words and you've done that well in this one. :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-03-05 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      Brevity and no wasted words is the hallmark of your most recent posts. Your words do much to show the glow that is ever present in your heart and the belief that you have in man and mankind.
    | Posted on 2007-08-15 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      This reads like a morning song of joy, Tif! It is elevating and inspirational in it's mood, and delightful to read!
    | Posted on 2007-08-11 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      You are a master at hitting the nail on the head and capturing the moment. Can't fault this one Tiff - it is great.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2007-08-10 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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