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He came to me like an empty canvas oh i was a beginner then I couldn't draw He came to me, he was white, his identity was clear I could see myself throught it I draw a line in my reflection, I draw a new one another line I made mistakes He's an empty canvas and my very first another line, I add colors He's my empty canvas I drew the black sky and some grey stars oh i was a beginner then you weren't better you were a empty canvas and i had my reflection in you, and i draw the black sky and the sun on me, in you. One day I came to you. you are not an empty canvas no more you had the sun the sky my grey stars. I could still see myself where I hadn't drawn. I said "i dont like it i hate it". you thought it looked good I wanted to tear you, But my love wouldnt let me My hand took the black color with my hate and spilled it on you I drew a fake void in you, on me. I couldnt see myself no more nor the sky the sun the stars has turned black. |
The metaphor's are a little shaky, but I get the general idea of the poem. Good job. "Thats all." | Posted on 2007-08-11 00:00:00 | by Kiddo | [ Reply to This ] | |