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Mind Fucked


Author: SammySueYou
ASL Info:    23/f/nm
Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 90 /78 /30
Words: 107
Class/Type: Poetry /I am dead inside
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Fucked from the toes to the head....


Mind Fucked



It started when I was only three and my toes went numb,
they weren't supposed to be touched the way that he did.
At the age of five I had already lost all of my feelings below the waist,
I wasn't supposed to be looked at the way he did, I was too young for love.
At the age of fifteen I lost feeling from my heart down,
I wasn't supposed to be used the way that he used me.
Now at the age of nineteen I lost all feeling from my head to my toes,
I wasn't suppose to be fucked the way they fucked me.




Submitted on 2007-08-11 11:16:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  thats hugely sad dude. but i liked the way you wrote it, matter of factly..instead of PITY ME NOW!!! very impressive.
| Posted on 2007-08-11 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]


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