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    dots Submission Name: It came from withindots
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    Author: lucianraven
    ASL Info:    21/M/Spfld Il
    Elite Ratio:    3.46 - 49/67/19
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 718
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 900



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       I don't know where this came from, but I met agirl recently, and she makes me feel like it will be ok, so I guess that is what this is about.


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    I scream into the microphone
    but no one hears my voice
    i can see that no one notices
    I'm down to my last choice

    i take the razor
    go to the shed
    i cut myself
    till the floor runs red

    maybe now
    someone will listen
    now i have finished
    my final mission

    And then I see her
    standing there
    she walks by
    bringing fresher air

    She walks to the house
    and knocks on the door
    i look through the window
    wanting to know more

    in such a life
    could it be?
    that she is here
    to look for me?

    I think to myself
    I sit and ponder
    as time runs out
    i start to wonder

    if she's here for me
    would i be ok?
    if i chose to love
    and live another day?




    Submitted on 2007-08-11 12:16:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I understand this write very well
    I too my Friend was once in these very same shoes
    I was so alone and had noone
    It wasnt untill I learned that in order to Love another you first have to Love yourself that things finally started getting better
    This write was a vivid trip into your life and I Thank You for inviting us your readers in
    Great Work
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-08-11 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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