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Submission Name:
For Everlasting
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Author:
obsidiandreams
ASL Info:
29/M/Canada
Elite Ratio:
3.53 - 169/212/105
Words:
26
Class/Type:
Poetry/Love
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For Everlasting
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Life by limelight
with a broken heart
Sing bittersweetly
how life restarts
Then take my hand
and wash away
Every instance
of your memory
Submitted on 2007-08-11 16:25:42
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This is short an sweet.
It tells a story.
Keep it up.
<3 Crescent
| Posted on 2007-08-20 00:00:00 | by
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