I really like this poem! It hit so close to home with me as I read it. I can relate in more ways than you could know.
I like how you start out by saying all the sad stuff and then in the end you say, "knowing you'll be okay". It gives me a feeling of hope.
In the 5th stanza, 2nd line, is the word "the" supposed to be "they"?
Great job with this one, keep up the good work! I hope to read more from you.
This is Really good. I think this could be better i was expecting somthing to just pop out and me make me say wow but it never happened. Maybe try so more imagery in the piece Like what u did in this stanza
"Their words cut
Like a knife on soft skin
Only judging what they see
Ignoring what's within"
Other than that this was really good piece I like it alot
Well hope to hear from you and keep up the good work