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    dots Submission Name: i saw her walkingdots
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    Author: parafraid
    ASL Info:    47/M/SC USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.29 - 0/2/14
    Words: 312
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsi saw her walkingdots
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    slowly, she walked with a limp, bent over by the years
    her hair gray, her hat from years ago
    carrying her bags, swinging
    in front of me on the same sidewalk in the same direction
    in her well worn shoes and her well worn dress
    she looked down, rarely up
    she looked at no one, no one looked at her
    she had a destination
    and i had one




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