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    dots Submission Name: Absurditiesdots
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    Author: Colten
    ASL Info:    19/Man?lol/U of I
    Elite Ratio:    3.05 - 62/99/43
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
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       Crazy thoughts often reveal not-so-crazy truths.


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    dotsAbsurditiesdots
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    "I want to want and need to need
    To spell my being,
    To give in to greed."

    The witches chanted their ill.

    "Shut up!" The Man yelled at them.

    They clenched shut their mouths
    As if they had Lockjaw.

    "Damn witches. They never shut up."
    The Man murmered to myself
    As The Man fell asleep in my bed.

    Meanwhile, the witches scurry off
    And a lone deer
    Of massive girth
    Casually walks down the cobblestone street.

    He sings:
    "The world knows, not sanity
    Drifting in, insanity.

    Where people choose, to defy
    The ones they love, with alliby.

    The feeble minds, do think and taunt
    The thought of God..."

    (hum hum hum)

    The deer drifts into the distance.
    Replacing him arrives
    Albert Einstein.

    "The deer may hint
    Of man's wanton ways
    In hypocracy and heresy.
    And The Man may show
    Society's disregard
    For culture and faith.

    But ultimately
    We must see the fallacies
    In ourselves...

    Rather than this absurd dream

    Before Intellect's wound
    Reveals itself.

    And my atomic child
    Burns men's souls."





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    ||| Comments |||
      This made me think of you and your silly craziness, and perhaps the fact that everything is linked by some sort of thought pattern, if only seen by the author.
    | Posted on 2007-08-22 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't know why, but this makes me think of your ultimate conspiracy theory, maybe just because everything is so random and interconnected.
    | Posted on 2007-08-18 00:00:00 | by jennah | [ Reply to This ]


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