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    dots Submission Name: Seasons of Lovedots
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    Author: Peggy Paris
    ASL Info:    61/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 747/570/167
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       We all need someone special to love no matter how young or old we are in years.


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    dotsSeasons of Lovedots
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    Imprisoned in a lonely heart
    Lay melodies unsung
    And memories for which a start
    Is yet to have begun.

    Somewhere within its chamber depths,
    A longing lingers near
    For hearts are meant to share a love
    And find that someone dear.

    If love should sprout one springtime day
    When life is young and sweet,
    How grand to see it blossom bright
    As two become complete!

    Or maybe love shall seek a mate
    Amid the roses red
    As summer evenings find romance
    Soon grabs a turning head.

    In autumn with its mysteries,
    Some mend their broken hearts
    Again to whisper words of love
    To newly found sweethearts.

    When love arrives in wintertime,
    It comes in snowy white;
    True beauty sees beyond the years
    And fills hearts with delight.

    As long as life and love remain,
    A song may fill each day;
    And I shall simply wish for you
    To hear love’s music play.





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      I was swept away by the flow and the content of this love nod to the discovery of love and all of its nuances. You have told a sweet story in such a way as to give new hope to the spurned among us.
    | Posted on 2007-08-20 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, i have to say this is amazing, great rhyming, i could see everything to you were describing,

    true poet!

    loved it

    sk x x x
    | Posted on 2007-08-13 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]
      This is outstanding, Sharon! Not only is the structure and rhyme excellent, but to adress love at the seasons in life is a beautiful idea! The poem is simply beautiful in it's context, structure, it's message, and it's delightful poetry! You've really produced a winner with this one Gal!

    Bravo! This goes in my Favs!
    | Posted on 2007-08-13 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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