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    dots Submission Name: iHURT.dots
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    Author: Qutedia7
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 54/70/31
    Words: 325
    Class/Type: Rant/The pain inside
    Total Views: 103
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    Bytes: 2187



    Description:
       my thoughts, feelings, &&pain is on this piece of work. it is about my grandmother finding someone after the death of my granddaddy..
    &&me being unable to let her go..


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    you.
    you did this to me.
    you broke me down.
    coming into my life when you knoe i dont need you.
    trying to fit in,
    when you knoe your not welcomed.
    especially when you think you can be the next man.
    which you can never be,
    because you cant replace my hurt,
    with the pain filling my bodyy,
    seeping with thoughts, words, and feelings.
    you dont knoe the pain we've been through,
    sooo..
    stop trying.
    you cant help out,
    you cant be him.
    you are just you.
    with the same thought in your head you had, when you saw her go through the pain..
    that you finally had your chance to get her,
    buttt..
    let me tell you somethinggg..
    your chance is going to run shortt..
    because once she see's what you have made her into,
    &&the secrets you have held from her,
    which are deep, dark, devilish,&&deciveing,
    the sting across your face is going to feel like hell has reached its peak of hotness.
    &&i cant wait until she knows it.
    you are nothing like him.
    if he was here, none of this would be happening,
    you wouldn't be in her life, with all the disapproval in the world.
    we disappove you in this familyy..
    &&i despise you the most, because i am not ready to see another 'man' in her lifee..
    she deserves better than you.
    she deserves him.
    the first man she ever lovedd.
    &&always will.
    cant you understand that?
    that you never be accepted into my life &&my family's??
    you just have her,
    &&no one else, because we knoe what she is getting into..
    leave her alone before you break her heart.
    one thing that she has never felt.
    &&onee thing i will NEVER let happen to her,
    because i LOVE her, shes my blood.
    &&that is the connection that we havee.
    which you dont haveee..

    sooo..
    pleasee.
    move on.
    &&find someone elsee.
    because i cant let her go.




    Submitted on 2007-08-13 13:41:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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