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    dots Submission Name: the green life awakeneddots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 474
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsthe green life awakeneddots
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    dance lovely
    & be the only true filter
    for the wind to run its silky fingers
    through the elegant space
    of your perfect undergrowth.

    the might of gravity is upon us,
    forcing what life and death
    there may be had amongst us
    to split the milky wood-life
    that bends & buckles us
    inside dreamy soft spoken travelled sleeps.

    there is so much beauty everywhere
    & the sleepy, purplish cedar
    of my inmost heart
    creaks along to nature so tantrically,
    & so full of the green-life awakened.

    & i feel so stolen
    by the perpetual drama
    that life seems to bleed out,
    blindly & with such furious of passion.




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