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    dots Submission Name: our own little worlddots
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    Author: secret kisses
    ASL Info:    22/f/uk
    Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 558/438/138
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsour own little worlddots
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    i love the way we sit here,
    in the summer breeze,
    whilst hearing the wind go by,
    and watching it playing in fallen leaves.

    i love the way the grass feels,
    as i stroke it with my hand,
    and seeing each strand move together,
    all throughout the land.

    can you smell how sweet this flower is,
    as i stroke it against your lips,
    and jst how smooth the petels are,
    as i brush it over your finger tips.

    i love laying here together,
    watching the clouds sail by,
    in our own little world just you and me,
    where no one can touch you and i x







    Submitted on 2007-08-13 15:36:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      some lovely rhyme and meter here! (this very fine poem does, however, need some editing to be "top drawer", several typos which can be fixed easily.) bravo ... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2007-09-04 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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