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    dots Submission Name: This Heartdots
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    Author: just an angel
    ASL Info:    17/F/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 95/109/59
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsThis Heartdots
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    This body has passed
    Survived many trials
    This mind was tested
    Only caring to be average
    Yet this heart is the heart of it all
    Pain bled through
    Sorrow still lingers
    And a dying death approaches
    This heart has survived
    But is no stronger than love
    Yet no weaker than infactuation
    Only an average attraction
    When love's true love can't be found
    It resides its shadow in this heart
    Never making a home
    Or settling for life
    But occupying an available space
    Wait it will, for better to come
    Waiting for to be saved
    So while love waits,
    It will be given everything
    This body and mind
    But most especially this heart




    Submitted on 2007-08-13 22:15:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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