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    dots Submission Name: to our soldiersdots
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    Author: secret kisses
    ASL Info:    22/f/uk
    Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 558/438/138
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 631
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       this is for troops and soldiers who are out fighting for our lives,

    i am proud of u dad x


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    dotsto our soldiersdots
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    we are proud of you,
    we send love to your troops,
    your men are our savours,
    they put put thier lives on the line for us.
    we are commited to them, as they are for us,
    please give them our thanx,
    and tell them we think of them always,
    we pray for them,
    and you are all in our thoughts.
    stay strong for all who love and believe in you,
    we are waiting for your safe return.
    have courage and let it ride with you,
    always have faith, and let angels guide you.

    to our soldiers our love and best wishes are with you x




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      A fine, fine sentiment, indeed! well done throughout the poem...need more of these...(typo in line four can be easily fixed) bravo... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2007-09-04 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      What a thoughtful message! Those of us who are safe and secure in our own homes cannot possibly realize how difficult the soldiers' lives are. I hope your dad sees what you've written; he will be very proud. Take care, Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-08-14 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      Kyrenia, this was so thoughtful! We all need to be more aware of the huge debt of gratitude we owe our soldiers who have their lives on the line. Your father will be very proud of you, and we all are for writing this! Three cheers for Kyrenia!
    | Posted on 2007-08-14 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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