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    dots Submission Name: I'm sorry (I really mean it this time)dots
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    Author: lolavie
    ASL Info:    23/female/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 70/175/103
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsI'm sorry (I really mean it this time)dots
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    The memories
    The "what if he's"
    The only thing thats on my mind
    Possibly
    he still feels for me
    and wants to come back in my life

    Maybe
    he's long gone
    One mistake to many, he flees
    Possibly
    the silence
    is just what he needs so he heals

    I cant tell my heart not break
    while I've got my hand on the stake
    I'm sorry, so sorry
    I've taken all i can take
    I can't tell my eyes not to cry
    It's my fault for telling you lies
    and I'm sorry .. so sorry
    and I really mean it this time...




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