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    dots Submission Name: In Search Of A Poetdots
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    Author: Magnolia Steele
    ASL Info:    30/female/Northwest CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.71 - 2491/1823/230
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Poetry/Me
    Total Views: 119
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1115



    Description:
       A new poem...it has been awhile Eite.


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    dotsIn Search Of A Poetdots
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    Can you see me?

    I'm there watching
    the words
    lift from the pages
    and
    wrap themselves
    in tidy red bow,
    ready to give
    themselves to me.

    Slyly

    I blend with the nouns
    and
    I become
    anyone
    anyplace
    anything
    I desire me to be.

    What about now...can you see me?

    I am in full action
    as a verb
    while I play
    with words
    taunting me to write,
    as I pursue
    images into the light,
    for all to see
    clearly
    through my brown eyes.

    Over here!

    I am lost
    in meter...
    the rhythm
    lures me into
    a dance
    with syllables,
    I count the beat,
    so as to
    follow along
    and
    not lose my place.

    Can you spot me?

    I am
    between the lines
    of the
    greatest poem,
    waiting
    to be written
    by me.





    Submitted on 2007-08-14 20:20:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is very creative, full of personification and metaphors everywhere. Anyone would enjoy this peice because it is neither too complex or too simple, just deep enough. If you just read the lines between the verses it feels like you're playing hide and seek. Great work.
    | Posted on 2007-08-15 00:00:00 | by 7makaveli | [ Reply to This ]



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