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    dots Submission Name: That Summerdots
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    Author: Magnolia Steele
    ASL Info:    30/female/Northwest CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.71 - 2492/1825/232
    Words: 210
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 794
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    dotsThat Summerdots
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    That summer...

    the one when a young girl
    found her safe place
    somewhere between those
    cotton candy kisses
    and
    butterscotch dreams,
    in the callous hands of
    a soft hearted boy
    She lost
    her mind
    her innocence
    herself
    in the back of his 65 mustang
    top down
    exposing flesh
    ripe as a peach...
    barely ripe for tasting.
    Yet, he sank his teeth in
    and she held on
    as they let go
    of childish ways
    that summer
    in which
    cartoon wishes
    to stay
    there
    forever
    melted on the pavement
    beneath her feet,
    aching to reach
    a cool spot
    within his heart.
    She took the senic route,
    cut corners
    bypassed signs warning

    WRONG WAY!

    Only to race herself
    into a dead end
    an no idea to
    turn the hands of
    time back
    to when youth was
    kind to her
    and
    the heat of the sun
    did not burn her
    with memories
    of him...
    of them that summer.






    Submitted on 2007-08-14 20:28:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I think you are a beautiful writer, I love the juxtoposition of
    in the callous hands of
    a soft hearted boy
    just really struck me as I was readin it, good work !!!
    | Posted on 2007-08-15 00:00:00 | by lynn marsters | [ Reply to This ]


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