this is good and whatever, but i don't really care much about it because it takes a lot for me to actually be like, "wow!"
so, i like the technique that you used and what not but i'm not a very big fan of love poems that scream "love poems"
do you get what i'm trying to say? hah, sorry if i'm not clear in my words.
it was unique and clever to use the term collide for this subject.
sorry, so short.