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Submission Name: Thinking dots

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Author:	tennisfuzz
ASL Info:	18/F/here.
Elite Ratio:	5.92 - 78/91/35
Words:	173

Class/Type:	Random Thoughts/Longing
Total Views:	189
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	924

Description:
random thoughts//// as category suggests

Thinking dots

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Intensity is a strange thing. Sometimes I will get my mind fixated on something, and then it won’t go away. It consumes me. Sometimes I can’t control my emotions like I want to. It frustrates me. There are days when life seems under control. Hah, most days it seems completely impossible. It overwhelms me… the millions of things that happen in a day. It frightens me how fast I crave the people who make me happy. My mind bursts with thoughts, especially thoughts of thoughts. The concept of happiness is much easier to grasp than happiness itself. A moment can be saturated with feelings that make you never want to let go. Impatience is a terrible thing. Buildup of tears is unhealthy, though, optimism is extremely important. Sometimes, the only thing you can do is trust, and sometimes trusting makes you feel stupid, and then crushed. There are not many who will last, but maybe they make life wonderful.

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  I see that this was submitted a long time ago but man can i relate. You've stated in words what i never seemed to be able to, not that I really tried. Sometimes it is cool to just see peoples thoughts just how they come and not in poetry form.
| Posted on 2008-07-06 00:00:00 | by Oli | [ Reply to This ]
  I really like this, kind of a soul vomit...it all came out at once....but what really makes this poem click is the ending....frustration, frustration, frustration....calm,
Great write keep it up,
Thanks,
Spin

| Posted on 2007-09-18 00:00:00 | by Spin | [ Reply to This ]
  grasp [then] happiness itself = than

but maybe they make life wonderful.

i like this for an ending.
random thoughts indeed but i do feel there is some kind of connection right throughout and i cannot help but think if you were to rearrange the ideas somewhat and fiddle with the presentation you could have quite a masterpiece of a poem on your hands.

and yes.
i do believe that the concept of happiness is easier to achieve than happiness itself. there are so many factors involved in ways we cannot see and work out and things that just refuse to budge when on the quest for happiness but i think it is attainable. i guess its a heart attitude. a choice as to how to respond to everything/anything that comes your way.

thoughts about thoughts.
i always used to strive for them.
or i would think about how i was thinking about nothing and therefore i would be annoyed coz i would be thinking about something...

the mind is a crazy thing and can do mad things given encouragement and boredom i guess.

control is completely relative i think.
sometimes i think its boring too...

interesting thoughts.
| Posted on 2007-08-16 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  I understand that form of intensity but of course i experience diffrent forms of them. At least in most cases you have an emotion. Often i find myself blank in feeling as if im numb. But of course ill admit that sometimes i wish i didnt feel the things i feel. However i will not deny that when i feel them, even if there painful i will drink every drop like a vampire drinking blood. There is a sweetness in pain, bitter of course but one that gives satisfaction. Even if it would nullify your entire writing and my comment i would say not to even think about your life. Keep it all in one moment at a time. Thats what worked for me but of course it is your own choice what to do.
Humans are relatively social creatures who often desire anothers contact. I myself would at a time would but i often dont see much benefit in contact with most people, but thats me. I actually enjoy the thoughts of thoughts but then again they say i think to much. I agree with your thought on hapiness. I myself can get caught to a previous thought but if i get to attached it becomes rather painful. My own impatience used to be very bothersome but i find that not thinking about it helps and distraction helps.
A build up of tears can be very unhealthy but of course one must simply find an outlet, but as i know to well thats dificult. Optimisim is very important as it helps me well, but i find it even better when one gives optimism to another to uplift them. No one can live without some trust, even if its just themselves. I myself dont trust most humans but of course there are those whose hearts bare no evil will. And who knows, some may last forever. :)

This was good because it raised my own thoughts so in fact my comment was a counter thought :P. Anyway i liked it and hope you write more. Its good to let your thoughts out.
| Posted on 2007-08-15 00:00:00 | by Seraphim X | [ Reply to This ]
  I always find these interesting. I write these, too, but I don't really post them on ES.

Anyway, I think rather than trusting it's more about being hopeful. You feel a bit less dumb, and a little less let down if things don't work out.

As far as life being out of control, eh, no one's really in control of their life at all.

Thanks for sharing. Keep writing
~Venia
| Posted on 2007-08-15 00:00:00 | by Venia | [ Reply to This ]

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