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    Author: Ignis Fatuus
    ASL Info:    18/m/earth
    Elite Ratio:    3.23 - 19/29/20
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I feel very much a greek hero
    I am doomed by what I would hold dear to myself.
    My brain has been overwruaght, nullifying it as a useful organ.
    What power I have left goes in circles or thinks to much and acts to little.

    My penchant for research has further compounded my error
    causing me to become paralyzed with inaction when I am left to my own devices.

    If this theme continues I will lose all that I now hold close to myself.
    Rationaly a change must be made.
    According to the story arc taht is not to be.

    Glad mylife isn;t some story book,
    as much as I wish it once was,
    this leaves me free.

    Now I must pray I am not to late,
    and that I can set right what I did disturb.
    For if that is granted, more may follow.




    Submitted on 2007-08-15 01:48:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i too am complexed on what the meaning is. but i have to say you aRE very discriptive.and thats what i like about poetry. but i wish i knew what you was talking about.
    | Posted on 2007-08-16 00:00:00 | by vlarrimore | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmm, I think you have a strong narrative voice, but I don't exactly understand what your piece is about, a little confusing, I think you'd write great prose though, I was very much struck by how clear your narrative voice is, if you have the time please comment on some of my work
    thank you
    | Posted on 2007-08-15 00:00:00 | by lynn marsters | [ Reply to This ]



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