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    dots Submission Name: confusiondots
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    Author: easily_ammused
    ASL Info:    20/f/cottage grove
    Elite Ratio:    0.85 - 84/45/28
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 724
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 742



    Description:
       To the guy that I feel hard core for this summer that decided i wouldn't find out if he cheated


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    dotsconfusiondots
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    the feeling, the rush
    the passion, the love
    the heartbreak.
    what are these feelings that i feel
    erase them please i do not want them
    let me be the mean old girl i used to be
    with these feelings i am now sweet
    what was i thinking
    being with you made me this way
    i want to be the old me
    i never got hurt that way
    the falling, the help
    the cheating, the forgiveness
    i want to feel the hate i used to
    not the love i feel now
    get me through this
    help me,
    the new things that i feel
    and yet the hurt i used to feel was better
    falling for someone is a waste of time
    be yourelf you will get through it.




    Submitted on 2007-08-15 12:29:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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