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    dots Submission Name: Acid Raindots
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    Author: RR7059
    Elite Ratio:    1.41 - 1/5/16
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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       I realise this is a bit melodramatic, it was written in a darker, self indulgent frame of mind!


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    dotsAcid Raindots
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    A million drops of acid rain I hold within my hand
    to cast upon this desert soul to boil the bitter sand.

    Polaroids of smiling ghosts fade yellow in my mind
    decaying in the winter glare of lonliness enshrined.

    As the tortured loves the torturer by a twisted joke of fate
    so I hug my darkest thoughts and wreath inside my hate.

    Desperate nights in gothic halls I tread with hardened face
    steel boots clang and crush all hope of love without a trace.

    My footprints lie beneath the snow stopped just near a wall
    the simple sign reads solitude at last this is my call.

    By freezing river a bag of bones the ice it burns my skin
    dark angels still this heartbeat let go immortal sin.




    Submitted on 2007-08-15 14:03:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nicely done, this is the first poem I have added to my favorites in ages.
    | Posted on 2007-08-17 00:00:00 | by SammySueYou | [ Reply to This ]



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