Scaary... and yet so increddibly wonderful...
Don't know why but it makes me think of a woman in an abusive relationship. I suppose it can be read in manny different ways... still love it
The layout of it all makes it more interesting, just like the woman(girl) it almost lures you to keep reading.
the imagery and storyline are compleatly flawless as far as I can see.
just one thing... the repetiton of mislead in the second (third) stanza messes things up... makes it feel wierd if you could find a substitute for either mislead or misleading i think it would get better.
It's like; I was stared at by the staring eyes, or examined by examining hands or something like that.
otherwise this is one of the better things I've read for a while