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    dots Submission Name: silver liningdots
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    Author: DontLetGo421
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 118/238/141
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotssilver liningdots
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    i'm feeling the silver lining
    and i'm wearing my smile bright
    baby would it be completely crazy
    if i told you everything will be alright

    ive stepped away for some time
    but now i'm back and i can just tell
    that things now are how they should be
    just even by the slightest wift of your smell

    maybe a reality check will be coming
    but for now lets soak up the perfection
    i cant get over everything falling in place
    just living with ease and never a correction




    Submitted on 2007-08-15 16:55:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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