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silver lining

Author: DontLetGo421
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silver lining

i'm feeling the silver lining
and i'm wearing my smile bright
baby would it be completely crazy
if i told you everything will be alright

ive stepped away for some time
but now i'm back and i can just tell
that things now are how they should be
just even by the slightest wift of your smell

maybe a reality check will be coming
but for now lets soak up the perfection
i cant get over everything falling in place
just living with ease and never a correction

Submitted on 2007-08-15 16:55:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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