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    dots Submission Name: Greendots
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    Author: AutumnLeaves
    ASL Info:    26/f/ Cyprus
    Elite Ratio:    4.62 - 95/103/44
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Green is someone that will always keep making appearances and disappearances in your life.


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    Nostalgia has found you
    Green,
    Once more.
    A tree waving
    At a perfectly idle midday hour.
    And all I can do is smile.
    I give you this,
    Green,
    A single sigh,
    That no one can see or notice
    As you discover me after all,
    As you surprise me
    With this subtle manner
    That I could never miss.
    Take this,
    Green,
    And be still again,
    Invisible,
    Imperceptible,
    Like the bittersweet frailty of your leaves.




    Submitted on 2007-08-16 14:49:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Why is this person who appears/disappears called Green? I'm just curious.

    Ah, good old nostalgia. Sometimes I'll smell a faint lingering odour of times past and boom! My mind will be there. It's crazy how it happens. Usually when you least expect it.

    I wish nostalgia hit me more often. Hopefully with a cane or stick or chocolate soft-serve ice cream! Uh...wait...that doesn't make sense...

    Hyper!
    | Posted on 2007-09-21 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
      Eeeee... gush. I'll be back. This resonates. Unfortunately, I was due somewhere... about now. Off to get ready. Will be back.

    Jase.
    | Posted on 2007-08-17 00:00:00 | by alteredlife | [ Reply to This ]
      Life, oh, weird conception beyond our understnadings... and the freshness we seek, the intensity, the pain... searching for winter just to experience spring, then, once again... human nature is so... Green. :)
    | Posted on 2007-08-16 00:00:00 | by -Lith-Ium- | [ Reply to This ]


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