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    dots Submission Name: Edmund with a capital Edots
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    Author: Imaginth
    Elite Ratio:    5.18 - 43/50/19
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Rannnnddddoooommm.


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    dotsEdmund with a capital Edots
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    Slip your arms around my waist.
    Hold me tight, don't let go.

    Play the music on the radio.

    Let's jump off this bridge, let it burn.
    All night long watch the show.

    Play the music on the radio.

    So slip your hand into mine.
    Let's shatter the glass holding us back.

    Play the music on the radio.

    So all night long, hold me tight. And just be mine 'cause I'll be yours.





    Play the music on the radio.




    Submitted on 2007-08-17 11:28:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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       thanks, pity I can't write summat inspired by you
    | Posted on 2007-08-17 00:00:00 | by Lord Bane | [ Reply to This ]
      Ooh, romantic. I likes it. Its great. Its romantic, mysterious, hasa certain ambience thats soothing. Good job!

    "Thats all."
    | Posted on 2007-08-17 00:00:00 | by Kiddo | [ Reply to This ]


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