Description: A girl that has tried not to cry in life.
So hard not to cry -------------------------------------------
Child of the night and shadowy corners,
Walk alone through the corridors.
Pick the path of dripping blood over emotional tears.
Hide the past as you carry on through your years.
Lonely you hide…
To fight off emotion.
Drowning yourself with this potion.
Hate the spell that cannot be broken.
Love the charm which is never spoken.
Would you rather speak through tears;
Or anger’s fate?
I would rather fight,
Than congregate.
Speak hatefull words…
You know you could be said as worse.
Worlds spill past your control.
Tears fill your eyes.
You’re filled with hate and selfish pride.
I got the gist of your internal pain during the reading of this piece. Unfortuately I felt that you were trapped by your rhyme schem rather than helped by it. Whe rhyme sounds forced it diminishes the effect of the piece.
Submission Name: So hard not to cry
