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    dots Submission Name: Inner "i"dots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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       Happy NOW ES!!!

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    dotsInner "i"dots

    Inner "i"
    Wide Open
    deep waters
    rush silent
    Awave ~ ~ ~

    Breath Divine
    fills lungs
    water &

    Submitted on 2007-08-17 18:33:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem is so cool and refreshing. SPLASH!

    No, seriously. This is what I call the "run-on" method/style, where you have lots of singular words in a long row/string (e.g. Like what I did in part of my poem called "Butterflies". It is a very relaxed yet neat way of writing. I should do it more often.

    I really liked this one tiff. Then again, you always write plenty of good poems.

    ~O(O~ Happy!
    | Posted on 2007-09-21 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
      It reminds me of a ying yang type of thing, having a balance. I dig the imagery and the simplicity of the whole piece, good job tiff.
    | Posted on 2007-08-25 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      I guess the title gives a very clear clue that leads to the message... the inner self has that deep, sparkling inner peace... it is delving into one's own being.... in my view, it is a state of deep meditation.

    So this is EPIPHANY... love it.
    | Posted on 2007-08-20 00:00:00 | by Parul garg | [ Reply to This ]
      o.O ... waw... a real masterpiece of singing colors and waves of liquid attraction into a deep ocean of cristal-like silence...

    It's a favourite!

    PS : I do not understand - what is there NOT to understand in this poem?! ... its a "clear" psychologic-resonating "lake of the Self"...
    | Posted on 2007-08-18 00:00:00 | by -Lith-Ium- | [ Reply to This ]
    Understand it or not, the words are quite soul touching.

    | Posted on 2007-08-18 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Ok, I am going to have to be honest and fess up right here and right now. I read this a few times and I am not sure what the underlying message of the piece is. But them I guess i don't have to understand everything to appreciate it.
    | Posted on 2007-08-18 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]

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