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    dots Submission Name: I dont wana be your ragdolldots
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    Author: xSaraHx
    ASL Info:    16/Female/Earth
    Elite Ratio:    4.28 - 107/74/47
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Angry
    Total Views: 157
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1073



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    dotsI dont wana be your ragdolldots
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    I dont wana be your ragdoll anymore anymore
    being dragged all over and tossed on the floor
    Im sick of you trying to tell me how to be
    and making your opinion heard a little too loudly
    I cant be your ragdoll
    anymore anymore

    For awhile you held me
    oh so tight
    all through the day
    and most of the night
    Then your ways changed
    You got too rough
    at first I liked it
    now its not enough
    I like a little abuse
    like cheese with wine
    but If you drink to much
    You wont even have a dime

    I dont wana be your ragdoll anymore anymore
    being dragged around and tossed on the floor
    stuffed in the closet
    and under your bed
    I have to listen all night
    to that voice in my head
    its saying that if I stayed
    happy I would have been
    but I think the voice is wrong
    more wrong than me being you ragdoll
    which I am
    no more no more
    I am your ragdoll
    no more no more




    Submitted on 2007-08-17 20:04:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ooh! i liked this a lot. the title put a really good image in my head - very original. why did you add (new) to the title though? oh well, this might make a great song. i think it could stand to be a little longer, and maybe slightly less of a rhyme, but that could work either way. so yeah, maybe this could be quite automic?

    ps, your new picture is cute, but i didn't get to see the old one enough. can you private message me how to go to your photobucket page, last time it wouldn't let me it said it was private and i needed a password or something.
    maybe i typed the wrong username.
    | Posted on 2007-08-18 00:00:00 | by freddybuzzkill | [ Reply to This ]



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