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    dots Submission Name: Walk with me, take my hand...dots
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    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 538
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsWalk with me, take my hand...dots
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    Walk with me, take my hand...

    Walk with me, take my hand...
    Down these halls of yesterday.
    Pictures linger in my mind,
    A sullen face from another time.

    Sleep with me, in my dreams...
    Hold me close and don't let go.
    Memories they always remind me,
    A person desiring to be free.

    Speak with me, hear my voice...
    Listen as I yearn to be heard.
    Sounds from the past still to clear,
    A voice still lingers in my ear.

    Cry with me, see my tears...
    Capture them as they fall.
    Envision me as I was before.
    A person and so much more.




    Submitted on 2007-08-19 15:03:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is delightful, Donna! A nostalgic, dreamlike walk back into yesterday, wistfully willing and wishing someone to be with you, and see you as you really were and really are!
    | Posted on 2007-08-20 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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