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    dots Submission Name: Don't Cry Motherdots
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    Author: Childe-Wrote
    Elite Ratio:    1.78 - 17/53/44
    Words: 291
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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       It was a letter that a mother found on her sons hospital bed..


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    dotsDon't Cry Motherdots
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    Dear Mother,

    I wrote this letter to apologize
    For the reasons I held by leaving
    And I know as you're reading
    You have your reasons for grieving

    When you care enough to blame
    Without thinking of the shame
    You're not doing much better
    So I decided to write you this letter
    I wish not to apologize for my words
    Nor as I raised a hand to strike you in fear
    And you can swear I'm disowned

    You held no sympathy when I was handcuffed
    And the police escorted me to prison
    So I'm on the phone tonight
    Asking forgiveness of this painful soul
    Despite all the times I have stoled

    I'm a teenager against the world
    I'm a child wanting this approval

    I will put up my middle finger
    Cause everyone is out for me
    And why can't you just see?
    All I want is for you to call me up
    And invite me to come back home
    Without having to just roam

    I will easily accept
    Even without the promises kept
    To know that you have one bit of care
    Before scolding me bout life being unfair

    You cannot deny, we are not perfect
    But throughout time, we were tested
    And this love you simply requested
    Leaving us bruised.hurt.guilty.
    Within the mistake I made
    I cannot come home

    Lying here, with regrets
    Without the underming threats
    Without the lies and the fights
    "I love you" never sounded sweet
    Until now that I can vow

    Lay me to rest without stress
    I close my eyes for this peace
    And this war that has to cease

    Goodbye mother.. don't cry
    From above the clouds I watch over you

    Love,
    Your Son




    Submitted on 2007-08-19 21:21:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow this is really sad, it made me cry, not many have made me do that. it seemed such a sad end between a mother and son. Joanna
    | Posted on 2007-08-20 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]
      That's so sad yet so deep. T-T
    | Posted on 2007-08-19 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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