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    dots Submission Name: Don't cry motherdots
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    Author: Childe-Wrote
    Elite Ratio:    1.86 - 17/47/39
    Words: 265
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       It was a letter that a mother found on her sons hospital bed..


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    dotsDon't cry motherdots
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    Dear mother,

    I wrote this letter to apologize
    But I had my reasons for leaving
    And now as you read this letter
    Perhaps you should have done better

    I do not apologize for all the things I said
    Nor as I raised a hand to strike you in fear
    And as I was handcuffed and put in the car
    There was no single sympathy, so I stand here

    Wishing you'd forgive this hurting soul
    Cause no teenager wants to know
    They aren't wanted in this cold world
    So call me up, ask me to come back home
    I'd understand and smile, gladly accepting
    Cause this heart won't admit but it's happy
    To know that someone is waiting at home for me

    Things are not the way, I realize that
    So long ago we were a perfect family
    But in time, it tested our love and left
    Leaving us bruised and hurt, laughing
    It told me to go home and just forget it
    But I know deep down, I couldn't do that
    Cause I made a mistake that I couldn't take back

    And for that, I ask for forgiveness...
    Just this once, I can only learn from my mistakes
    It is my last breath, I want to hear I love you
    It sounded so sweet before and I lay here
    Listening to the sweet sounds
    Knowing if I closed my eyes, it'd be the last
    So forgive my stupidity.. I'm just a teenager

    Goodbye mother... don't cry
    From above the clouds I watch over you

    Love,
    Your son




    Submitted on 2007-08-19 21:21:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow this is really sad, it made me cry, not many have made me do that. it seemed such a sad end between a mother and son. Joanna
    | Posted on 2007-08-20 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]
      That's so sad yet so deep. T-T
    | Posted on 2007-08-19 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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