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    dots Submission Name: Sa Mga Nakalimot (To Those Who Have Forgotten)dots
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    Author: sleephappy
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 1/2/10
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Me
    Total Views: 962
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsSa Mga Nakalimot (To Those Who Have Forgotten)dots
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    Salamat..

    Nalaman ko kung ano ako sa buhay niyo

    Isang wala..

    Isang alalaala na nilipad ng hangin ng kahapon

    Na hinahamak ng inyong pagngiti at inyong kaligayahan

    Salamat..

    Dahil hindi ako nagtagal kasama niyo..

    Thank you..
    I found out what I am in your lives
    Nothing..
    A memory blown away by yesterday's wind
    Mocked by your smiles and your happiness
    Thank you..
    Because I did not stay with you..
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    Submitted on 2007-08-19 21:48:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm not sure what to think after reading this. It didn't make me feel anything particular... but I'm one of those people who needs everything spelled out for me. If someone wanted "more" out of this, I think that you could expand a little maybe? Yea, I don't know what to make of it.
    | Posted on 2007-08-20 00:00:00 | by cwy0925 | [ Reply to This ]


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