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    dots Submission Name: Horseshoes and Handgrenades (Close)dots
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    Author: lebeauvide
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 75/179/84
    Words: 355
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Angry
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    Description:
       This is written for Cameron, who used to be my best friend. I wrote him a letter apologizing for things that have gone on in our past(s), and when weeks of silence went by, I decided that I didn't have to take this. I don't need him in my life anymore. And this... Is me being really pissed off about it.


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    So I guess this is where
    We meet our seperate ends
    Where we smile and walk away
    Saying, "Yeah, we'll still be friends."
    We were doing great things
    We were winning all the races
    We got so close just to fall
    Flat on our faces

    In horseshoes and handgrenades
    That's where "close" counts
    I see the words forming on your lips
    But I don't want to hear what's coming out
    You just took away everything
    That I ever thought was mine
    We were running in first place
    But you tripped me at the finish line

    I love getting stabbed in the back
    By someone who smiles to your face
    I've got some choice words for you, my friend
    They'll put you back in your place
    You held my heart in your hands
    And still you wanted more
    I treated you like a God
    But now I see you're just a whore

    In horseshoes and handgrenades
    That's where "close" counts
    I see the words forming on your lips
    But I don't want to hear what's coming out
    You just took away everything
    That I ever thought was mine
    We were running in first place
    But you tripped me at the finish line

    Funny how all of these things
    Are so quick to come and pass
    So why don't you take those apologies
    And shove them right back up your ass
    I'm tired of hearing the excuses
    Or just the empty silence
    You've pushed me way too far this time
    And I'm resorting to violence

    In horseshoes and handgrenades
    That's where "close" counts
    I see the words forming on your lips
    But I don't want to hear what's coming out
    You just took away everything
    That I ever thought was mine
    We were running in first place
    But you tripped me at the finish line




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