Description: This is a Mcfly B-Side which is dedicated to a girl on this site (she knows who she is). Sorry its another thing I didn't write
The Guy Who Turned Her Down (Tom Fletcher) -------------------------------------------
It hasn't been the best of days,
Since she drove off and left me standing in a haze
Because I've been so out of order
Yes I have babe
My new found love showed up and blew her out the water
And its so not easy
(I know she'll say)
I'm sleazy
(I love the way)
You please me
I can't believe I found
A girl who turned my life around
She suddenly
Came onto me
Pin me down
On the ground
I could have pushed away
But I didn't know what she'd say
But I'm glad I'm not the guy who turned her down
I cut my social life in two
I quit my city job so I can be here with you
My friends say I'm a fool in love
But I'm not babe
It's worth my while because you're what my dreams are made of
Cos you look like
(A beauty queen)
Sucked in by
(Your tractor beam)
You know I
I can't believe I found
A girl who turned my life around
She suddenly
Came onto me
Pin me down
On the ground
I could have pushed away
But I didn't know what she'd say
But I'm glad I'm not the guy who turned her down
Years go by
(As the years go by)
I wonder why
(I start to wonder why)
She had come to me
(Bah da bah bah)
So glad that she met me
(Bah da bah bah)
And life without you baby, just don't know where I would be
I can't believe I found
A girl who turned my life around
She suddenly
Came onto me
Pin me down
On the ground
I could have pushed away
But I didn't know what she'd say
But I'm glad I'm not the guy who turned her down (down down down down)
Yeah I'm glad I'm not the guy who turned her down (down down down down)
Yeah I'm glad I'm not the guy who turned her down
Hi, I agree somewhat with shombray, it seems a bit indifferent, it has a lot of cliché lines, but I really do like the idea of this thinking type of song I think painting your words will bring new life to your words, colors strike emotion. I would love to hear music behind this as well :)
This is a really sweet poem but a little indifferent. Because it is not like your normal love poem that is what makes the poem good. It kind of seemed like a song because of these lines :
She had come to me
(Bah da bah bah)
So glad that she met me
(Bah da bah bah)
And life without you baby, just don't know where I would be .The title of your poem is what catches the readers attention because the person will wan tot know what guy turned her down or do you mean you turned her down, Good write.
Submission Name: The Guy Who Turned Her Down (Tom Fletcher)
